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and now i’m static, and your sky is turning purple and grey

17 Jan

For several hours, I’ve been staring at this. Only, less zoomed out. Pretty, huh? I worked through some of the tough spots, but there is still a lot to do. Like, the ending. It seems like a crucial part.

Here is an excerpt. It still needs some work:

Emmy remembered Megan’s bright red backpack and considered it to be her only notable attribute. When she spoke, she was too quiet. She was always listening to conversations people never noticed she was a part of. She was plain and boring. And red bag was not going to change that.

That is my excuse for a short blog entry tonight. I’ve been busy.

 

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2 Responses to “and now i’m static, and your sky is turning purple and grey”

  1. Matty January 18, 2012 at 10:56 am #

    Computer! Full-screen! Zoom in on that story and ENHANCE!

  2. ZachsGoals January 19, 2012 at 9:32 am #

    You are forgiven. ^_^

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